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Raistlin:

You said once that you felt no love for any being.
You said it was slain by your eyes.
That all beauty, enchantment, and wonder,
You saw once has now died.

The hourglass through which you see,
Cannot be the reason.
For Shalafi, I have seen,
That look in your eyes of what could have been.

I will tell you Shalafi, let me tell you.

In the spring we watch as a rose rises from the earth,
As it is born it grows in strength to live,
Or the world around it will kill it.
As is the saying among elves,
"To live in unison, or not to live at all."

As winter comes on, the rose losess it's beauty
But not yet does it die,
It simpally goes to sleep.

Then once more in the spring,
It rises from the ash.
To fill our blatent morning with hope.
The candle in the dark.

Many years we watch the cycle flow,
Till the river becomes, no more.
With that we watch it's beauty eternal,
Fade from this world.
However subtle.

You see Shalafi, we all watch things,
People and nature alike,
Die before our eyes like the vision that you see.

But "Shalori,"
You don't want to kill me.

                                              Our Bonds Eternal;
                                             Dalamar the Dark
I like the idea, and it's so sweet.... kinda.

Yes i am very poetic. Not very GOOD petry, but i write it.

I figure that is something he would say to raist.

I do not own raistlin, or dalamar, or the elven words included.

"shalafi" Means "master"
"Shalori" Means "Beloved" or "loved one"

Yes, i like yaoi and yuri.
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DarkLottis Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2010
I loved that final sentence :"But "Shalori,"
You don't want to kill me." it is very beautiful poem:)
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EnyaStillblood Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2010
Heh. Yes, I like yaoi too. not that I have much experience. My parents are always around, so...
I love this concept.
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Janus-Moon Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2009
My favorite pairing, there are too few stories written about them
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sephar-in-hell Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2007
Oh. My. God. I luv u! I luv Raist and i luv dalamar! and i new it was him when he said shalafi. they're both so adorable! Very nice job! :heart: :+fav:
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:iconraistlins-apprentice:
Thank you so much! I love writing this sort of thing! ^^ I love Raist, he's amazing, who doesn't love him? And Dalamar? charming, and good looking. They are awsome together.
Raist totally pwns dalamar though <3
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sephar-in-hell Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
of course he does! after all HE took the test! XP
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Raistlins-apprentice Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2008
^^ I know, he's so awsome. Lucky Dalamar, to be able to learn from him...
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:iconsephar-in-hell:
sephar-in-hell Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2008
he so is! ^^
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Skull-Bearer Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2007
Very beautiful
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:iconraistlins-apprentice:
Thank you ^^
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